Wednesday, March 23, 2011

I wish one could see the other.....


Walking on the populated street,
I saw two of the children sweet,
There was one whose caring father held his hand,
And then there was the other, carrying his sibling.
There was one, crying for a bigger chocolate,
And then there was the other, eating bread crumbs happily.
There was one, happily sitting in the car looking at bigger ones
And then there was the other, walking barefoot on and on.
There was one, buying chandelier for his home,
And then there was the other, seeing water dropping from the roof.
There was one, fighting for the bigger, red remote car,
And then there was the other, cleaning the real cars on road.
There was one, buying red, yellow and pink from Lilliputs
And then there was the other, fighting cold and sun all on his own.
There was one, jumping in his new woodland shoes,
And then there was the other, polishing shoes helplessly.
There was one, smiling all day like a prince, the king of his home
And then there was the other, crying for love.
There was one, asking for his desires to be fulfilled,
And then there was the other, waiting for his needs to be fulfilled.
I wish one could see the other, one could help the other.
I desire, one sees the other, one helps the other.
I believe one would see the other, one would help the other.

9 comments:

Yashna said...

Beautiful!! Beautiful!!! I love it..And this is such a divine observation...

Bhavna said...

Very touching..though brings out the sad story tht we see being played out evryday.. the end on an optimistic note connects well.. 'I desire, one sees the other.....
I believe one would see the other..'

Beautifully written.

Bhavna said...
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Bhavna said...

*had posted same comment twice.

Priya Juneja said...

:):) Thank you Bhawna and Yashna...

varun sharma said...

heart touching lines.. really nice..
wish i cud help one see the other..

Priya Juneja said...

:) Thanks Varun...

cool3ayush said...

Good observation .... nicely written ... can we just call it Karma ???

Priya Juneja said...

Perhaps yes! And, thank you :)